Question:
Senior Citizens would you like to read this for a Sunday night?...?
?
2011-09-25 08:22:45 UTC
I Never got it named, so would like your suggestions, please............Flowers faces, washed with rain,...Remind me of tears,at our Lords pain!....Blood red poppies, of gore that ran....Down from the cross, from the Son of man...The white of a Lilly, like a cloud....Remind me of, His Holy Shroud....A violet, of the sky above....That looked down, with heavenly love!....The lupin, of the cowardly., spear...That rent the side, of one so dear!....But most of all, the Catkins bloom....Reminds us of one!, risen from the tomb..........
Nine answers:
Margaret C
2011-09-25 11:54:29 UTC
"An Easter Bouquet"
P.L.
2011-09-25 20:18:32 UTC
That is beautiful Thomas and the suggestion for a title from Tom is very good.
Hobo
2011-09-25 21:17:07 UTC
You make it sound as if your invisible friend was the only one to ever suffer, or that in some strange, inexplicable way, it suffered more than anyone else.
anonymous
2011-09-25 20:54:37 UTC
Thomas, you never fail to amaze me with your poems.



Remind me of tears, at our Lords pain!
Tom
2011-09-25 17:42:13 UTC
Wonderful Thomas, your best yet! How about "Flowers of Grace?"
SavvySue
2011-09-25 19:23:11 UTC
I think you are very poetic, Thomas!
?
2011-09-25 21:11:08 UTC
very interesting. keep up the good work.
Ol Uncle Dave
2011-09-25 17:17:55 UTC
thank you.
?
2011-09-25 15:27:36 UTC
No i wouldn't, nor any other day of the week.


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